# Realtime composition experiment

Original exercise: a railway platform, round clock, and one traveler.

Reading order: traveler / platform / clock.
Palette: indigo, rust, cream.
Destination and crop:

| Pass | Drawing change | Fixed elements | What improved? | What became worse? |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| A | Traveler left of center | Depth, clock, palette | | |
| B | Larger foreground platform | Traveler position and height | | |
| C | Clock separated from silhouette | Other major shapes | | |

- [ ] Text names the same objects as the drawing.
- [ ] Large shapes read before detail is added.
- [ ] Traveler silhouette is distinct from background.
- [ ] Clock reads as part of the station.
- [ ] Each saved comparison uses equal display size.
- [ ] Open area for final typography remains useful.
- [ ] Final crop preserves the reading order.

Selected composition:
Why it works:
Details a later generation must preserve: