ORIGINAL PRACTICE EXERCISE
Brief: place a blue card fifteen centimeters from the lamp; keep the bottle label clear; move the card slightly left.

Deliberately flawed draft: Put the the blue card fifty centimeters from the lamp. Move it to the left. Check this before taking the photograph.

Proposed correction: Place the blue card fifteen centimeters from the lamp. Keep the bottle label clear. Turn the card slightly left and check the reflection before taking the photograph.

REVIEW LOG
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